The animation was okay I guess but it just wasn't funny and didn't really have anything else going for it.
The animation was okay I guess but it just wasn't funny and didn't really have anything else going for it.
how about a little thing called LIGHTSABERS
The animation is very good! Although some jokes fall flat or are to prolonged, it was pretty damn funny. Some of the voice actors were good but some were a bit lacking, but I'm sure with some practice that could easily be fixed. The length of this flash was quite tasty with it's full 3 minutes. All in all a good flash and I hope to see more from you fellas.
The animation is a bit choppy but is presentable and the jokes were good for a chuckle. The flash ended quite abruptly, so perhaps you could fix that in future animations so they won't be so jarring. All in all a decent flash.
Good animation, the main problem is that the punchline is not only spoiled in the title of the movie but it is also not that funny. I like the animation, just work on your writing a bit.
Thanks for your comment. I know my writing needs some soap 'n water and what not. But I was merely testing a new technique. So I came up with this in the middle of a Skype convo.
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